Casporb's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[ZdiZdiK - SkyBound]

Pretty cool, and interesting! However there's a few parts, like 01:13, 01:50 and 02:21, which randomly cut out for some reason. Other than that, cool song!

X-500 responds:

Yes, I tried to fix it, but reason - plugin demo version, sorry.

[𝐅𝐎R𝐄𝐕E𝐑 𝐎P𝐄𝐍 𝐒K𝐈𝐄S!]

Sorry I haven't been able to review any of your songs recently. This is such an improvement!

Charlmot responds:

That's all good, thank you!

[[Brostep] KVLLA - Lack Of Energy]

Really cool!

KVLLA responds:

Thanks!!

[Wind's Embrace]

It was definitely a good idea to make a longer song, I think you really tried hard with the chord progressions and it payed off. I really like how the melodies "play around" or "interact" with each other, and you definitely did the inro-drop-build-up-bridge-drop-outro thing. The other review said that there was a lack of bass in the second half which is kind of true but I don't think it affects the song to much. The only thing I think you need to improve on is mixing - the piano is a bit too loud. Other than that, great song, keep it up! 95/100

Sound Design: 9/10 - This song doesn't have your usual sounds but don't think that's a problem, you tried adding piano and I think it turned out well. The only thing you need to work on sound design wise is the mixing.
Composition: 10/10 - You distinguished the different sections of the song, and the melodies work really well on top of each other. Gud stuff!
Atmosphere: 10/10 - Like most of your songs, I can imagine a scenario in a game or movie. For this one it's someone standing atop a windy mountain.

Charlmot responds:

Thank you so much for always leaving such detailed reviews!! I did try really hard to have a better chord progression and melody this time around so I really appreciate the fact that you mentioned it! :)

[Sunshine Drive]

Really experimental and cool, does feel a little out of tune and lacks a great melody, but still good. Like usual, it has cool synths, great drums, and a nice quirky style. Keep it up!

Sound Design: 10/10 - Cool synths and good mixing.
Composition: 8/10 - A tiny bit out of tune but decent.
Atmosphere: 10/10 - I could totally imagine this in some animation of someone driving in a sunlit desert valley.

Charlmot responds:

Thanks for the review! I'm not sure what exactly is out of tune but I'll try my best not to have it that way in the future
Melody wise I'm trying my best lol, I'll get it soon dw :)

[Spiraling Stars]

Good song, I like the unique sounds you introduce later on. The mixing is good, the drums do their job really well. My advice for a later song is to try and come up with a catchier melody, and maybe make it a little longer. Other than that, keep it up!

Sound Design: 10/10 - Good mixing and unique sounds.
Composition: 8/10 - Could have a clearer chord progression and better melody, but still good.
Atmosphere: 10/10 - Clear quirky vibe enforced by the sounds that come in at 00:53.

Charlmot responds:

I appreciate that! I'll keep that in mind for sure :)

[Destroyed]

In the intro the piano and synth aren't synced properly and the drop feels to much like random noises and is really short.

Sound Design: 8/10 - Mixed pretty well but to many presets again.
Composition: 5/10 - No melody, not synced and the drop's to random and out of tune.
Atmosphere: 8/10 - There's quite a clear mood I guess.

MinixOfficial responds:

It’s in key

[take_a_break.mp3]

Please don't leave )':

G2961 responds:

I've been rethinking it and thought I'd take a break.

[Cridexx - Riddim? (Prev 2)]

Huge improvement, maybe after that add the melody over the drop? The mixing is clearly better, and I can't wait until you finish it.

Sound Design: 10/10 - Now it's mixed this gets a 10.
Composition: 8/10 - The melody maybe needs more time to play, it only plays for around six seconds, and it would be cool if you brought it into the drop.
Atmosphere: ?/10 - Still not really long enough to judge.

Cridexx responds:

So I have something to strive for! Thx so much for your support!!!