I agree with @underscore8298, while I think your mixing has improved, especially with the vocals you REALLY need to work on it. The melody is pretty good though, although I'm not so keen on the drop. Also, I like the music video. Keep improving!
Sound Design: 6/10 - I said it before, the mixing really ruins it for me, although I do LIKE the singing.
Composition: 8/10 - Good melodies, and catchy singing. Just not a great drop.
Atmosphere: 9/10 - The song has a clear, desperate kinda theme, so nice atmosphere.