Nice remix, the mixing isn't great - around 02:41 the kick actually distorts and the white noise sweeps are way to loud and unmixed - but it's OK. At 01:21 you use a pad in the background which is a great addition. Overall, 8/10, keep it up!
Sound Design: 6/10 - As I said before, it's not mixed very well, and everything could do with effects and EQ'ing.
Composition: 8/10 - The original melody is a banger, so I have to give this on a high; maybe you could have added some more new composition though?
Atmosphere: 10/10 - You've kept the original theme, the remix has great atmosphere.